Deutsch-Englisch Übersetzung für exposition

expositionThe Strasbourg police estimate that some 30 000 people have gathered between the Parc des Expositions and the Place de la République. Nach Einschätzung der Straßburger Polizei haben sich etwa 30 000 Menschen zwischen dem Parc des Expositions und dem Place de la République versammelt. This essay has too much exposition in it.My reviewer said she couldnt picture the setting for my story, so Im improving the exposition.
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The cars dull finish showed years of neglectAll he had to show for four years of attendance at college was a framed piece of paperCould you please show him on his way. He has overstayed his welcome